I was bored so i made a secret organization

I was bored so i made a secret organization

Earth year 2196.

The world changed at the year 2110 when the first ability user was discovered in India. The government calls those ability users ‘Esper’.

Since then, at age of 12, children will be tested if they have power or not. The esper population increased every year until 40% of the population has been proved as Esper.

Akasa Naomi, a young Esper was bored in this world with abilities user. She decided to make her own Secret Organization in order to relieve her boredom.

What will happen to Naomi in her adventure to build a Secret Organization. Will it get destroyed or will it cause a change to the world?

Eeee. the yuri will start slow and the pace of the *cough* yuri will be increased after chapter 150.

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Seeing as there’s no review on this novel as of now I’ll try with one to convince the people reading this to pick it up. Secret organization is like what the synopsis tells you. The setting is in a some what futuristic earth with superpowers sort of like MHA and the main character is a overpowered, hidden strength, organization building little girl. If you like that sort of stuff especially overpowered and organization building this novels for you. Greatly inspired by power in the shadows and probably the index world the setting and characters are fun and perfect for what it is.

Very slipshod plot and writing. Writer is obviously not good at English and the plot is very scuffed, in fact the writer may be making it up as she/he goes along. Sh*t happens without any reason and can get very confusing. Do not believe the others in the review section. Currently, this is the only one star review. I honestly don’t believe that this is so popular, I don’t think it deserves its high ratings and attention.

Great read so far!

The MC is an overpowered girl who create her own organisation. It’s quite similar to «To be a power in the shadows», because the MC bullsh*t some excuse to her subordinate but they turned out to be true 😂

The story is quite lighthearted even though it include human experiment and corruption, but it’s overall funny and entertaining.

The story also is a yuri story, but it’s not the main plot. But keep it in mind incase you are not into yuri.

I’m really looking forward for this novel and I hope the author won’t drop it!

Grammar could use some work and I was hoping the story would be better than what «To be a power in the shadows» did. it wasn’t.

Are all secret organizations stories just about some guy founding it for the purpose of fighting something made up but turns out to be real and then using their absurd luck and powers to bullsh*t their way through everything?

Honestly, I don’t have much to complain about. I have loved every single development the author made. Originally I thought this novel would fall off, as I thought that it would encounter the multiple flaws that occur when you have such an overpowered cast on the same team, however that doesn’t happen.

This isn’t the kind of novel that solves every single problem the cast encounters in 50 chapters and then struggles to keep the story interesting or just goes down the path of slice of life. The story was constantly interesting, the characters are not too many in number or too few and adequately developed throughout the story.

The one thing that keeps this novel from being close to perfect are the sometimes occurring grammar errors. They aren’t very major, the usual «being to lazy to add one ‘s’ to nouns to pluralize » and so on.

So, I award you, kind sir, the greatest honor I can bestow. A 5 star rating with a cherry on top.

I was bored so I made a Secret Organization SO

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Synopsis

Earth year 2196.

The world changed at the year 2110 when the first ability user was discovered in India. The government calls those ability users ‘Esper’.

Since then, at age of 12, children will be tested if they have power or not. The esper population increased every year until 40% of the population has been proved as Esper.

Akasa Naomi, a young Esper was bored in this world with abilities user. She decided to make her own Secret Organization in order to relieve her boredom.

What will happen to Naomi in her adventure to build a Secret Organization. Will it get destroyed or will it caused a change to the world?

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This story has slow romance, it focused on the MC Akasa Naomi and her daily life as the secret organization’s leader.

She will plan and do anything she wanted to do. A lot of short battle and plan at least until the late arc because the enemy is not introduced yet.

So the pace will be slow or fast depending on the arc.
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I was bored so i made a secret organization

Unfortunately the worst thing about it is the speed of releases. As of writing this and I hope it one day makes this review a lie. It has not updated for months.

Hope everything is well with the translators.

THE PROTAGONIST IS THE MAIN ANTAGONIST. Come and change my mind, but to me, that’s how it is. I’m sure all of us has already known what they are, but let me recap it for a bit. The protagonist is the center character of the story, while the antagonist is the one who stirs troubles. Most antagonists are an active character who pushes the plot, while most JP’s protagonists are a reactive character that is being pushed by the plot. Sago (MC) is a completely active character. He was once a reactive character, but as the world is shitty, there is nothing he can react to. We can see this transition at the end part of the prologue. He is not a villain (he could literally conquer the whole world singlehandedly, but he didn’t), but he doesn’t fall to the category of heroic either. An anti-hero protagonist? Maybe. Everything he does, every little thing it is, he does it out of self-interest. In OPM, Saitama is bored because he has nobody who can fight against him, and he doesn’t do anything about it. Sago, on the other hand, acts. He nurtures people and plays with their life. There are several antagonists in the story itself, characters like cops and thugs alike, but nobody can actually stand to him. He has to do it himself. If anything, the closest thing to the concept of antagonist for Sago is the dull and boring world.

I won’t say that this novel is flawless; I can list a number of plotholes that emerged after the third arc (Arc 1 and 2 are perfect, fite me). The magic system is Hard (go find what is Soft and Hard magic system, it helps a lot) in this novel. And most prominently, while the MC is the one who runs everything, we still can’t get bored by how the novel progresses. Many surprises and gags are laid out cleverly. There are d’aww moments, exciting moments, and ROFL moments despite the fact that everything goes within prediction. Not to mention, his interaction with Kaburagi (main heroine) is refreshing. Romance subplot mostly doesn’t develop, as Sago and Kaburagi are the perfect half of each other from the very first time they met.

The characters are interesting. Sago is the godmaker, he is the plot and the force of the novel. Kaburagi is the supplier, she is the one who intermediates between Sago and other characters. There are also Touka and Shouta, «Main Characters» that Sago and Kaburagi made. Vava-nyan, a lolibaba. And Igu, the main heroine (monkey). That’s the set for Arc 1 and 2. For Arc 3, we get a whole new set of characters for Sago to play with, and they keep multiply as the story goes. As of the time this review is written, the RAW is only up to 67 chapters (Six Arcs, including the prologue).

The chapters are long and each part is even bigger than an usual chapter size. Cool, right? Except nothing happens.

16 chapters in (which are more like 40 regular chapters) and everything I’ve read were mostly internal ramblings of the MC and his training/discovery of powers. NOTHING interesting happens. And I don’t mean in the action/superhero genre, I mean in ANY genre. No drama, comedy, romance, suspense, not even mundane activities of a slice of life.

Nothing Happens! So far the MC decided to quit his job and build a secret organization. He found the FL and then gave her powers. Female lead bought a building with a bar as a front and then they recruited another young girl as their first member. That’s it: everything else are powers discussion/training, even though he doesn’t use them for anything important, aside from peeking at girls in the shower.

How the hell does this have so many 5 stars reviews?

Anyways, at least the translation is very well done, so kudos for the translator. Sorry that I rly disliked the novel.

I was bored so i made a secret organization

Public will likely still believe it to be the Esper Association due to the simple fact that Moon and them are the only ones actively biting at each other. No other power has appeared to got involved between them while that interview was basically just exposing the Association. As for who sent the nukes. Well they would need to be a power connected with a powerful government I imagine; this means Russia, China, US, Japan and most of Europe is on the chopping block.

Thanks for the chapter

Well yeah, but the power structure of the world had changed after the war as stated a few chapters ago.

don’t forgot north Korea

More than 200mph. lol what an understatement. ICBM warheads on re-entry are hypersonic. The missile climbs to the upper atmosphere, glides towards the target, then releases anywhere from 1 to 15 spike-shaped warheads (which can all recieve different targets) to freefall from the edge of space at hypersonic speeds. Forget the nuclear explosion, they posess enough kinetic energy to level a few blocks with the impact alone. They never reach the ground though, as they are airburst detonated a few thousand feet over the target for maximum effect. This is why most nations focus on intercepting ICBMs in the climb and cruise stages, because a single interceptor is all that’s needed to hit a (relatively) slow moving target and disable all warheads simultaneously. Once the missile splits and the much smaller warheads begin their reentry and independent targeting, they are almost impossible to intercept. Too small, too bloody fast, and there are up to 15 of them. Missile defense relies upon early detection of a launch. Germany would have known they were being fired upon up to 30mins prior to impact, and the Marshal would have been grabbed by her security team within seconds. Less than 90 seconds after missile launch was detected, interceptors would have been fired. Whether or not they would sucessfully disable the enemy missile depends on how early they detected it. This strike sounds like a 5-warhead MRV. Basically a nuclear clusterbomb. They don’t have independent targeting, and would spread out on reentry like a shotgun to cover the entire city. A single waread would do just fine (better even) in this application. Modern warheads usually end up within 100m of their target, so having 5 on the same target is a complete waste. If you want more blast on 1 target, use a bigger warhead.

a war sounds like something Naomi would expect, I mean, didn’t she do everything out of boredom?? a war is anything but boring

Well, esper wars wont be boring. Probably.

A lot of veteran soldiers will say that war is 5% terror and 95% boredom. Because it’s not like medieval war with two armies clashing. There’s a lot of waiting involved.

I was bored so i made a secret organization

Took a while for me to write this chapter.

Definitely not because I am watching a vtuber that I forgot to upload it. Definitely not!!

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Naomi, Rekka, and Lee Hyun-Woo walked to one of the shore near the previous Esper Association’s HQ. When they reached the shore, Rekka asked Naomi.

“Um, boss? I wanted to ask something but. How do we call you?”

Naomi hearing his question turned her attention to Rekka. She had realized that she forgot to tell them how to call her. She had introduced herself as Mugetsu, but that was a spur of a moment. When rescuing Rekka from Hokkaido’s Jail, she noticed that today there was no moon in the sky. That’s why she had called herself Mugetsu (Moonless Sky).

“Fair point, I guess that’s important. Then I will allow both of you to call me Mugetsu.” Naomi answered Rekka as she gazed into the sky.

“No, we can’t call you that. In organization rank is important, so please allow us to call you something else.” Said Rekka.

“Is that so? Then think about it yourself, call me anything you want.” The truth is Naomi is glad that he refused to call her Mugetsu.

‘Well, the truth is I wanted to be called boss.’

Rekka and Lee Hyun-Woo began discussing how to call Naomi. The sight of 2 men, both carrying a girl debating about how to call Naomi was amusing. Naomi even chuckled a little.

“How… about…” “No…it’s…then…” they keep debating about how to call Naomi.

Meanwhile, Naomi didn’t forget why she brings them to the shore. She continued her purpose that the 2 didn’t know.

When Naomi found Rekka, she didn’t laze around and just preparing her suit and finding a piece of evidence. She had made a secret base too. At first, she wanted the base to be an underground base or a normal looking café. But after some consideration and her training with her Telekinesis progressed, she decided to make a certain secret base.

The discussion between Rekka and Lee Hyun-Woo continued for a while until they nodded to each other.

“That took both of you a while. So what did you decide?” Naomi asked the two of them.

“Yes, it was an interesting discussion for both of us. We reached an agreement and decided to call you [Princess].” Said Rekka.

‘Wait a minute!!’ Naomi flinched a bit after hearing what Rekka had said.

“That’s right, we are uncertain whatever to call you [Princess] or [Lady Boss]. But after we had a discussion for a while and inspecting something, we settled with [Princess] because we think it’s suitable with you.” Continued Lee Hyun-Woo.

‘Oi!! What do you mean by suitable!! You are looking at my pitiful B Cup, right? Right!? Just you know I am still 14 years old and still growing!!’ Naomi’s face twitched hearing Lee Hyun-Woo’s explanation. ‘I really wanted to smash him to the ground now. But, I will lose an important sla- member of my organization if I do that.’

Naomi felt the ridicule in the name, but she couldn’t object about it because she was the one who told Rekka to decide it himself.

“Do as you like. I remember you wanted to ask something. What is it?”

“Oh right, princess. May I ask what are we doing here? We just standing on the shore, I am afraid if the Esper Organization’s reinforcement will try to chase after us.” Asked Rekka.

“We are waiting.” Answered Naomi.

“Haa… waiting is it? The truth is I am worried about my sister’s condition. Can you please tell me what we are waiting for?”

“Our transportation, then I shall ask something too. Lee Hyun-Woo was it? Can you tell me your ability and your sister’s name? If you don’t mind I wanted to know her ability too.” Naomi asked Lee Hyun-Woo after answering Rekka’s question. Rekka wasn’t satisfied with her answer but choose to back down, he knows that asking more questions will not produce any further results.

“I don’t mind in the slightest about it. My ability allowed me to create a barrier, and I can add any effect to my barrier. But there is a limit, the more effect I add to my barrier the more fragile it becomes. On the contrary, if I just create a barrier with no special effect the strongest barrier will be created. I can maintain the barrier although I was away, so I don’t need to be near the barrier. Is there any question before I continued to my sister, princess?” Explained Lee Hyun-Woo

“So can you make a barrier to hide something if I asked you to?” Asked Naomi.

“Then about your sister.”

“My sister’s name is Lee Dan-Bi, her ability was to create and control water. Because of something from the past, my sister had to take medicine provided by Esper Association and since then, sometimes she can’t control her ability. She is A-Ranked Esper.” Explained Lee Hyun-Woo.

“I see, your case is like Rekka but it’s the opposite.”

‘Seems like I hit a jackpot with him. I got 2 members, or maybe 4 members in 1 night.’

“Indeed, in my case, their target was my sister. Princess, shall I introduce my sister too?” Said Rekka.

“Yes, I found some info about your sister but I want to hear it directly from you.” The truth is, Naomi doesn’t know anything about Rekka’s sister except for her name and her condition.

“As you know, my sister’s name is Homuhara Anna. She is S-Ranked Esper and her ability is Enchantment. She can apply 1 effect on her drawing, the effect is equivalent to the size of the drawing.” Explained Rekka

“And that was why the Esper Association wanted her. Her ability was unique, at least never recorded in history.” Said Naomi. “Let’s save the explanation and introduction later, our transportation has arrived.”

Naomi operated her power since they have arrived at the shore. From distance, they could see a big cloud approaching their destination.

Naomi who wanted a secret base so badly had decided on something ridiculous. When she planned how her secret base, she remembers her Telekinesis and thought ‘Why don’t I made a flying base?’. She decided on a ridiculous idea on a whim. Then she was searching for a deserted island and lifted it to the sky. She used a cloud as a camouflage for her base, using her Telekinesis, she moves a cloud to completely hide the flying island that she uses as her base.

Rekka and Lee Hyun-Woo only saw a big cloud moving in the distance. They thought that their Princess had called a cloud as their transportation. But, all of a sudden the cloud began to disperse and expose a flying island hiding behind it. They were shocked seeing the flying island, but a voice brings them back to their senses.

“I present you, that is our organization base.”